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Posted by Dinky Mind on Monday, July 06, 2009 in , ,

میں ھوں بہت ھی عام سا
اک قصہ ناتمام سا

نا لھجہ بے مثال ھی
نا بات میں کمال ھی

ھوں دیکھنے میں عام سا
اداسیوں کی شام سا

جیسے کہ میں اک راز ھوں
اور خود سے بے نیاز ھوں

نا رانجھا نہ میں قیس ھوں
نا انشا نا ھی فیض ھوں

میں پیکرِ اخلاص ھوں
وفا ، دعا اور آس ھوں

میں خود سے خود شناس ھوں
اب تم ھی کرو یہ فیصلہ۔۔۔

میں ھوں بہت ھی عام سا؟
یا پھر بہت ھی خاص ھوں؟

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28 Comments


ahem ahem!!
kahan sey chapee hai!!
=D


good shot...:)


~Jingo: Got it as a forwarded msg :P

~KZ: Thanks =) I like it too =)


you wrote this ???????????? 0_0


~Ubaid: Nahhh... I'm not an urdu poet


Awesome! :)

And awesome pic too!

Chumpoo says:

mey bhe kuch shair wair bak layta houn


jis ney bhi likha hai kamaaaaal hai seriously :D


~Siras: Me loves it too =)

~Chumpoo: To kuch farmaiyay :P

~Ubaid: Oh yeahhhhh =)


wow..


Ahho. Foran blog pe bhi agai? ;)
Very very cool!


~Ali: Thanks for liking =)

~Absar: Blog per pehlay he aa gai thi :P


Mujhe koi parh kar suna de =$

=(


~Huda: Bachpan mein perha hota to aaj mushkil na hoti :P But aap ka to bachpan he gaya. Somebody's 18 now. Legal! :P


HAHAHA.
I love the ending.
And I was surprised I could read the whole poem.
I feeel good
:D


Right ..

I can read urdu very well Ema, but I was too lazy so I just asked someone .. ke parh ke suna do .. Khair choro SAWJ bhaii suna dain gey!


Thanks .. Im khas ;)


~Qurrat: That's great! I should write more Urdu posts then? :P

~Huda: Sawj bhai ko bhee urdu nahi aati :P

~Asma: I was asking about myself. *sigh* khush fehmian :P


LOL!

Ema .. aatii hai un ko ;)


Ufff....Okayyyy :P


amazing shit!

you know how much I love poetry, right?
read my first line again.


Hawww... bohat buri baat!!


beautifulllllll umem.....

i didnt know u are into poetry :O


I don't write poems. I just admire them =)


har shakhs apni jagah boht khaas hai..be assured about that: )


Very true!! I totally agree with it!


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